I chose the photo of Delanie, 9 New jersey,It’s a small room paint of red paint in one side of the photo you can see the bed, which is a bed for one person that has cover of patchwork and the bed is made of wood with a modern style, and curves on the wood, between the mattress and the keeper there’s a stuffed animal trapped, it’s a small cow of white color.On the following wall there’s a dressing table and wardrobe next to the wall which it borders to the door, the dressing table has incorporated a big white mirror with a framework made wood painted of white, on the table has are different objects, a butterfly wings for kid size with green colors, also old fashioned clock with all the hours, and what it looks like be a music box with a ballerina on the top, the wardrobe was serious drawers , and in the top of one three’s silver purse hang it from the top one. On the high shelf there is an open umbrella of the Japanese style with two other objects.After this wall there’s a white painted door, on the same wall there’s a microphone and a keyboard, also tape recorder on the floor, next to what it looks like a cd player, and a backpack with wheels. On the floor next to it there’s a carpet in a shape of strawberry what it says “Barry cool”.
0 Comentarios
Are there places/spaces you are not allowed to enter or participate? Why?
There’s a couple places I can’t enter or participate, places for my gender I’m not allowed to go in, or other for my social class, because I’m not wealthy. I can’t going in, like some social events, or clubs. Some streets in my city are dangerous to transit or places at night better not to walk. In some way are clearly is not allowed for a woman to walk or to be in. Do your friends, family, and co-workers have access to different places than you? Yes there are members of my family who have bigger access to some work areas and different places they are allowed to be in, like social events, farms or places are located for business or work. I think depending on your role and profession will change the places you visit every day, The spaces are public are those are located into the town like the parks and streets, and the houses in between like shops, different type of business, and houses are private and need some social codes and different rules to be allowed to go in.
In my personal experience the most difficult part of the WP#1 was the ideal of be able to communicate what I have in my and how I have into consideration the audience. I think my writing skills still have a long way to be improve. I think with this information on mind, I know now in my first drafts are the first to accomplish what I’m trying to communicate more clearly. I think on my previous process I felt quite overwhelm because I wasn’t able to express myself in better and my audience did not understand my message. What I learn most is how important is to organize the information and having a plan to use with the rhetorical tools I learn. And how to appeal to of the use of those. For me the language barrier still present on the grammatical mistakes, besides the obvious part, I have a trouble founding out how my community and the people I live with handle an heartbreak, and how that will affect the community environment, was a good feeling after asking to the people around how they feel about this process, and seem I was in the right path. I think I did accomplish what I was doing the effort to communicate, and that for me was very satisfy, to see how my capacities have grown into this month of the course I have been take. I think that writing on reflection is fundamental to accomplish clear text on the context are require. I think WPA help me to realize how value is to have the right tools to write. And the reflection on the time of reading and reading as writer will create and strong criteria that create better concepts. I like to do make drafting on sections, I like to do it step by step and later on go ahead and improve the whole document. I think is better in that way to be able to pay attention to details, so in this type of drafting I can make sure they are include of what I want to say.
How do you understand the term “rough draft?” How does a “rough draft” differ from a “final draft?” What does your sense of this difference tell you about what you value in (or how you think of) final, completed pieces of writing? I would believe rough draft it’s the first time you try to accomplish what you need to say, and on the final draft is you found the right way to express those ideas feelings. It’s also sharped to an audience and have a purpose. Please give these questions some thought; share your reflections with your classmates, read what they have to say, and then respond to 2-3 of your peers' posts. What does the discussion forum on drafting reveal to you about the ways in which different people approach drafting? Why are these differences important? After reading the information of my peers I realize we have similar answers to mine, a person have a bullet method, and the person organize ideas by the topic and after to sub idea. Other ones where quite similar than mine, so we have similar process to analyze the subjects and the way we make the drafts, and the other different where related on the execution of those ideas and how they can accomplish the final draft on the better way possible. So I learn that those differences are value I can I applied to my own way work on my drafts can be more efficient. For example on team works can be used to accomplish the goal in different works. And my drafts I would still use the same process of thinking but it other options. After reading the information of my peers I realize we have similar answers to mine, a person have a bullet method, and the person organize ideas by the topic and after to sub idea.
Other ones where quite similar than mine, so we have similar process to analyze the subjects and the way we make the drafts, and the other different where related on the execution of those ideas and how they can accomplish the final draft on the better way possible. So I learn that those differences are value I can I applied to my own way work on my drafts can be more efficient. For example on team works can be used to accomplish the goal in different works. And my drafts I would still use the same process of thinking but it other options. My cultural practice will be drinking coffee. I think is can be related to my cultural practices because since we woke up we are used to drink coffee, and keep doing in it during the day. Coffee in Colombia is sell on the street in all the cities of Colombia, there’s a small cup that is worth almost nothing. You can see the elder people drinking coffee on the parks after lunch. In all the important business food is also included, it’s of my knowledge that coffee is drink around the globe, is that in my city there’s an necessity to drink it and to be awake, the gourmet shops are not common, the people prefer drink the coffee is sell on street for the price and the approachable.
I think the first time I drink coffee was a 7 years old. I took a sip of my mom’s mug, my mum used to prepare coffee all the afternoon after lunch, practice I keep doing after lunch, my mom and I share usually the coffee of the afternoon. I can say it’s our small ritual, as my mom teach me how to do it, and it’s very frequent on the family. Haz clic aquí para editar. How does your outward appearance (i.e. clothing, makeup, hairstyle, accessories, etc.) reflect your cultural identity? I wear a lot of earnings with cultural items like a characteristic hats, birds or flowers can be recognize as Colombian. Besides I long squirts which is old fashion lady used to wear, and colorful clothes are typical In the Caribbean, my hair is long which is common denomination of beauty in the country I hear a lot of typical Colombian music, cumbia porro and cautautoras, wich make be accord to my ancestor and my heritage. I like to speak to the people on the street and do small-talk, which is view as well manner and create boding into the community. A daily ritual is having a hot coffee after lunch, is common in all Colombia. My cultural manners where mostly Catholics: not to steal not kill, I do believe my culture make be more friendly and open to people. I like to help other and have contact with my community and around. The negative part my belives would affect how I coincibe discipline isn’t the best, which I’m trying to improve. My food is a lot cheese and dairy’s include, I eat one portion of rice every day, and different types of bananas. Diferent types of tubers are important on the eating habits. For the weather and the humanity to I take a shower two showers per day in the morning and night. I usually tend to cook for me and my brother, which is more common a woman cooks than a men. The imaginary of the Caribbean paradise, beach, sand, beer beautiful woman and the ideal of the eternal party. It would reflect on my openness on social networks, and how to be woman and Latin can be related as “sexy” or good dancer. Colombian people is associated to flowers, coffee and cocaine I work in truism so it’s often for me hear the question of: is safe to walk around? Or my favorite is oh, you are Latin you must go dancer! is in your blood! The last one is be associate for been Colombia to Pablo Escobar or drug cartels. Its seem to me that for generate ideas help me to read about a subject, I like to read papers or anthropology journals I might be interest to investigate or read, I frequently need to do a background check to be sure the subject can be done with my sources and my time. The second step is write a mind maps, with all the information is brainstorming all the ideas, and sometime small draws. After making those two steps I tend to be lost, I do not what information be discharge and I keep thinking what would be best to do? I tend to call a mentor or friend, or someone who know more about issue better than me to help me out to resolve, to give other ideas or matters I haven’t consider. I explain the ideas and listen someone else opinion make sense to write about it. And after these three steps I stared to write.
However, I’m not sure how to describe how my culture manage the process to generate ideas, from my experience that’s quite a big word and large area to be able to say something legit, I would write on behalf of friends and peers, because is the most close to explain a cultural deference, my friends like to get reunited and speak how they want to proceed with the work, the usually speak for a couple hours to be clear enough on the process of making the paper. After do a research on internet, to complete the chore. With respect to my father tend to proceed with ideas quite different of myself, he like to go on walks, and after the walks, he sits to write, lose ideas, and mumbling, afterwards, the tend to have an idea to do, he enjoy making board games with different structures and rules. To conclude after I read the answers from the forum discussion were more about how they can achieve ideas through the internet, and how this can work out inside of the community they are living. I consider in the global time internet has become a big source information without us be complete aware position internet has on your lives. My life as writer has been a life time journey. I wanted to be writer of novels when in high school years, I strongly believe writing was something you were gifted, and no need for the effort, or if you pushed too much probably we weren’t to be good enough. My favorite writer was Julio Córtazar, which has a very particular style to write, as very long descriptions in very select words, his most famous book called “Rayuela” was a unique book to read. Is many different books in one book the reader can read one chapter as complete history, but all the chapters belongs to one history. This book definitely change the way the world, and I was inspire to become a writer, so after my high school years, I applied to best public university of my country, to study universal literature but I “wasn’t smart enough “and I didn’t get in, so I drop my dream to become a writer.
I didn’t write anymore, not even short paragraphs, for the time lapse of two years. I didn’t read any books, but when I get to colleague, slowly start to understand that to write you do need to be privilege mind to write, all you need the constancy to write and discipline. My university paper still poorly written, because it still scares me that what I “do is not good enough” I have learn in my freshman year about the social sciences tools, but I can’t use them correctly if can’t write decent paper therefore speaking about the rhetorical knowledge is to decompose the world in the correct words for to be compressible for others. I’m still learning how to write and founding my own voice. The need to improve these skills led me to search for a composition course in the area where I live. However, I live in a small city with warm weather and opened hearted people, and I didn’t find a course, therefore I started to look for a different way to accomplish my goal. This is how the amazing English composition course came up, and I read what meaning to learn that matched what I needed to improve. I’m looking forward to writing and reading my peers work, it will allow me the capacity to improve my grammatical skills which I will need later in my professional career. Most of all, I just want to able to write texts are compressible well redacted. That’s my main goal at the moment. |
Archivos |